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Focused on the lissome silhouette in the distance, outlined against an ocean of night, his quickened pace mirrored his rushing pulse. She continued to whisper, her voice beguilingly close, as if she stood beside right him, speaking ever so softly in his ear and his thoughts spun.
Unable to concentrate upon the rocky terrain as her curves and slender limbs came more fully into view, he stumbled more than once, cursed at his clumsiness; then went sprawling into the dust.
An onslaught of vicious laughter ensued; echoing round him from nowhere and everywhere, and when it began, her whispers ceased.
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~Morgan~
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Part One – This Flash Fiction piece is a sequel to Passage, which I wrote in response to Sue Vincent’s #Writephoto weekly photoprompt.
Part Two – Time Stood Still
Part Three – The Void
Part Four – Her Voice
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Beautiful Original Photograph by: Matt Payne
Not the romantic scene I expected. Well done…now I want more.
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🙂 Im setting up the twist, but its hard to do in 100 words LOL 😉 Thank You for continued reading 🙂
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Added this too 🙂
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Thanks ever so much Sue, though please don’t feel you need to. I just got caught up in the story lol.
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It is a pleasure to do so 🙂 Hopefully the rreaders will get caught up in it too 🙂
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🙂
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Great flash fiction Morgan. Love this!
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This is beautiful, Morgan! ❤
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I think you’re enjoying these and it shows. If you’re not, ignore I said that LOL
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LOL no no , you are right, I am enjoying them! although it may end up a Short story by the time I am done with it. Which is ok…something else to publish down the road, eh? 🙂
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I like your thinking. 🙂
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Wonderfulness!
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Smiles 🙂
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A playful twist to the journey. Well done.
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Im trying to wrap it up, but Im having too much fun with it LOL 🙂
Thanks Sargon for continuing to read 🙂
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No reason to wrap it up if you are enjoying it.
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🙂
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Right on!
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lol 🙂 So glad you’re into it 🙂
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