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Turning began as some of the hardest work she had ever done, round and round; round and round; the repetition creating soreness that seeped into bone. ‘Creation takes skill and effort’ the wizened woman told her before leaving her with the stones; ‘skill and effort, repeating, repeating.’
Grinding the harvest into useful fodder, she sat amid the stones, turning one, then the other; the effort of gleaning something valuable honing and reshaping not only the kernels of possibility, but her self as well. Turning, turning, muscles burning, skill and effort gleaning true.
Creation: art that blends hard work with faith.
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Every Wednesday we get a new picture prompt for the Friday Fictioneers, a writing challenge to spin a tale of exactly 100 words, graciously hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. This is my contribution.
You can add your link here: http://www.inlinkz.com/new/view.php?id=661812
Also, as part of #WritingforWriters Wednesdays. Interested in taking part of this challenge…visit Rochelles blog for info 🙂
~Morgan~
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Photography by: © Shaktiki Sharma
Morgan, I love this! Every word, each repetition, the story line, and your amazing poetic voice woven in. So well done. Thank you! 💕
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Aww thank you so much Elouise 🙂 Im not even really aware of my ‘poetic voice’, but its such a delight to hear that others hear it 🙂 Many Blessings my Sweet Friend ~
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You’re welcome! 😊
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Dear Morgan,
Apparently you figured out the link. 😉 The repetition of the action is strengthened by the repetition of the words. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle, glad you liked it. Im just not sure how to insert the little froggy pic, but the link works 🙂
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I don’t know if you’ve tried this yet. On Rochelle’s prompt page is a link to the code. But before you get there, you need to sign in to the Inlinkz site, this is free, just create an account and log in. There’s the code, then you copy/paste that into your blog post–in HTML mode.
If you can’t access the code, try this:
Copy/paste in html mode into your blog post. Next time do the same, but change the number (here 661812). Each of the inlinz sites has an id number which you see in the address bar. Copy that number and put it in the right place. I use that all the time because I want my FF posts to have the same format each week. I just copy the html code and then make changes. Hope that helps.
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This didn’t accept the code. Let’s try again:
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Thanks Gah, I will give this a try and see it if works..hopefully 😉 Much appreciated.
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Love the repetition in this. It really emphasises the repetition of the work.
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Thanks Clare, I hoped it might and not just come across as boring. Thank You so much for reading 🙂
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Lovely that she learned something about herself as she was working – growing as she grinds! Great tale
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Thank You Lynn 🙂 It took a while for my thoughts to turn this one out. the image just didn’t speak to me initially, so Im delighted and surprised with what jumped onto the page 🙂
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It was a great take on the photo. 🙂
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Morgan, this is a beautiful slice of life. You really have mastered the art of writing. I love this!
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aww that is so sweet Sue 🙂 Im certainly finding these writing challenges…well, challenging. not to mention rewarding. This one really made me THINK, because the picture didn’t speak to me straightaway.
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Good stuff! I have written flashers before, but 200 word ones. It’s much more difficult to do 100 word flash fiction….but it’s very educational. We learn to delete the extra words that don’t really add much but volume.
Very nice. I’ll be back.
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You are so right, I am typically quite verbose, so challenging myself to a 100-word limit is tough, but I have found too that I write and then go back and am able to delete much that is not ‘necessary” 😉 Thank You for Reading 🙂 Glad you enjoyed it. (see what I mean!?) lol
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This is a great prompt to do flash… you should try it Jane.
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Bjorn, me??? I spent 4 years at ERWA writing flashers. I love them but I also like other forms of poetry, literature. LOL! I have a probably 50 of them molting on my files. The rules at ERWA was that a flasher had to be a complete story, not just a scene. I find 100 word flashers very difficult to do this….much inference in there.
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Clever idea, well written.
And with an inbuilt life lesson.
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Im so glad you enjoyed it 🙂 thank you ever so much!
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Can feel the effort in the turning through your writing. Very descriptive. Excellent.
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🙂 Thank You so much Iain 🙂 Thats so awesome to hear and makes me smile 🙂 Im so glad you enjoyed it.
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The turning, turning burning works so well to create a feeling of the toil… but even more the understanding that you are part of something more…
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So glad you liked it Bjorn 🙂 Thank You ever so much!
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This is great. Meditation through repetition, always good for the art. A wonderful story.
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So glad you enjoyed it, Gah 🙂 I wasn’t entirely sure where it was leading me at first, but I followed ….thank you ever so much for reading.
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A delightful vignette. The repetition worked well.
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I am so glad you liked it Sandra. Thanks Ever So for stopping in to read 🙂
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So many great phrases in this – I especially loved your last line. Great piece!
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🙂 Thank You Ever so much 🙂 Im delighted you enjoyed it so!
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The repetition is poetic! A great take on the prompt
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Thank You so much Laurie 🙂 Im so glad you enjoyed it. thank you for reading!
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This reminds me of the three witches in Macbeth
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thats rather amazing 🙂 Thank You!!! 🙂
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There’s an absolutely delightful rhythm to this. Thank you.
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Lovely story, Morgan. It did have a poetic quality about it. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank You so much for reading Suzanne. Im happy you enjoyed it. The prompt was certainly challenging this time!
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