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Stillness Whispers All Around,
Delicate,
Imperceptible,
Incongruous Sound;
The Hush Speaking softly
Of Another Place and Time;
Bending Perception
Through Inharmonious Rhyme.
The Fog Enwraps From Every Side,
Closing In,
Drawing Out
An Indiscernible Cry;
The Mist Breathing Blithely,
A Leviathan of Olde;
Enshrouding Inexorably
With Inescapable Cold.
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By ~Morgan~
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Wonderful language–love “bending perception” and the 4 final lines especially.
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So glad you liked it 🙂 The inspiration of this poem comes from the scene in The Others where Nicole Kidman’s character gets lost/enwrapped in the fog.
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Oh yes…interesting movie.
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one of my favs
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🙂
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Reblogged this on Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie.
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Beautifully written, gave me goosebumps…
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Thanks ever so much 🙂
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Your welcome, Morgan!
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Love it, very intricately written. Thanks for sharing, Morgan
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I truly appreciate that. Thank you so much ❤️
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Beautiful flow of emotions and imagery. Thank you for sharing 🙏
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So sorry I missed your message. Was having an issue with not getting my notifications through WP.
Thanks ever so much! I truly appreciate you!
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I appreciate you as well. My visits with you are truly inspiring 😊
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I love the imagery and the way you manage to get the feel of the fog. Beautifully done.
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Wow! Truly beautiful
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Thank You 😀
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Beautiful use of language. So evocative.
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