Break
Like Rain upon the Mourning Cloud,
Falling from the Tumbling Thunder
In Torrents of Refreshing chasms
That Cleanse and Renew,
Breaking
Down the barriers,
Changing bleak and miserable
Into New Growth and New Life,
Generating a Season of Joy
Broken
Only by the Gathering of Clouds
From which Rivers of Life
Shall once Again
Break.
~Morgan~
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Morgan, this is wonderful flow.. like the flow, and the short lines to give emphasis to the meaning.. and the rebirth for sure… very positive end.. and a wonderful picture.
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Thank you so much Bjorn…I am always thrilled when you stop by …you see my writing in ways I do not/can not. 🙂
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Excellent as always
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Aww thank you Ever so much 🙂
And I haven’t forgotten about the kind award you gave…Im working up a post for it 🙂 Thank You!!
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Take your time :]
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What an amazingly vivid description. “In torrents of refreshing chasms” is such a powerful line. Well done.
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Thank You again my new Friend 🙂 I love describing the ordinary in an out of the ordinary manner. Im glad Im not the only one, apparently 😉
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I always thought of myself as overly dramatic, but poetry condones that 😉
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And often prefers it. Imagine Shakespeare dumbed down…how boring should that be!
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I do not believe art needs to be made accessible to those who do not wish to understand it. Do not bring the peak of the mountain to me; bring me to the mountain and teach me to climb. Only then can I appreciate the true glory of the climax. 😉
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Brilliant 😉 I entirely agree!
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Perfect, Morgan
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😉 Thank You Dear Friend 🙂
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That’s just beautiful Morgan! 😀
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Thank You Izaak 🙂
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