Amreen of Paint The World With Words has inspired and challenged me this morning with the following post: http://painttheworldwithwords.wordpress.com/2013/10/14/poetic-form-of-the-week-blues-poem/
I’ve never been an ardent lover of The Blues, at least, not until recently. Admittedly my discovery of Hugh Laurie (ie., House) and his Jazzy, New Orleans style of Blues has vastly influenced this change in my perceptions, but I will not deny that the accumulation of several years beyond the age of twenty may also have played a role. Whatever the reason though (my heart or my shoes) I’ve learned there’s more inspiration than I first thought in The Blues. (Sorry, it’s the poet in me). It’s that toe-tappin, finger-snappin’, head-waggin’ sound (that always makes me think of the Bill Cosby dance).
So, Rising to the challenge laid before me, (though I’m not certain how Bluesy it is) here is my offering of a Blues Poem:
Pressin’ On
Ever Stugglin’ to Walk this road,
Got Nothing to Show for carryin’ this load,
Once in a while it’ll get my goat,
But it Keeps me Pressin On.
At the end of the day I’ll Lay me Down,
Wipe away the dirt along wit’ this frown,
Listenin’ for that solitary sound,
That’ll Keep me Pressin’ On.
When the Mornin’ comes and I gotta Rise,
I’ll Drink Satisfaction from these groanin’ sighs,
Sweatin’ Tears and Blood while the long day flies,
It’ll Keep me Pressin’ On.
I’ll Move this mountain tho’ it breaks me,
Bottle of Amber that pays my fee,
Bit of rhyme and music to set me free,
Sure Keeps me Pressin’ On.
Can’t be lookin’ back now, The Past is Past,
You Gotta live alone with the Dice You Cast,
One Day is comin’ at the Sweet Last,
And that Keeps me Pressin’ On
Can’t have it All, You can only have Some,
Unless it’s a bottle of Jamaican Rum,
But that Heavenly Peace, It Always comes
And Keeps Me Pressin’ On.
~Morgan~
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Excellent imagery, it definitely has the spirit of the Blues running right through it and the repetition of the phrase is also very Blues like. I’m glad to hear you’ve started liking the Blues, and I’m so glad you mentioned about the challenge to write a blues poem. For the past few weeks now I’ve been going crazy for Blues poetry. The most famous Blues poem is by Langston Hughes and it’s called “The Weary Blues” and I don’t usually like to give out links to my blog because it seems like a plug but there’s a post on my blog with “The Weary Blues” poem and also the audio of Langston Hughes reading it which is excellent. Keep up the excellent writing and listening to the Blues (just not so much Hugh Laurie, ooops)
http://imgonnastudytherain.wordpress.com/2013/06/30/langston-hughes-the-weary-blues-audio-and-text/
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I take it you don’t find Hugh’s version of blues bluesy? I will be waiting to see a blues poem by you as well 🙂
Thank You ever so much for your enthusiastic comment…I may need to look at writing this form more often 🙂
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Maybe try a little bit of J.J. Cale ??
This was blue enough for me.
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🙂 Thank You 🙂
It was fun writing it, I got all twangy for a bit !
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