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The space was small, yet vast. A corridor into the unknown; a portal into possibility and he gazed through the confusing labyrinth, contemplating his choice. Inward or outward; up or down, the avenue toward what he sought yawned before him, perilous and strange, yet beguilingly inviting.
He had waited many long days for that moment. The anticipation of opportunity thrilled through him with revitalizing electricity. No longer would he be trapped in the mundane halls of this reality; a new realm waited, he only needed to choose. Inward or outward; up or down?
Each prospect enticed him with a hint of mystery or the lush scent of the obscure, but he could only make one selection and, at last, he smiled. His direction was clear. He chose the realm where endless variety and challenge piqued his curiosity, inviting the vanguard of intrepidity.
Inward, into the undiscovered country of himself.
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150 Words
Written for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers, a Writing Prompt blog that supplies a photo prompt once each week to Inspire, Challenge and Share the joy of the written word.
~Morgan~
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Photograph by Joy Pixley
Fabulous Morgan!
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Thank You Holly 🙂 Im really enjoying the challenge of 100-Word-Stories 🙂 Glad you enjoyed my introspective twist 🙂
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very much so!
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That is such an amazing picture! And story!
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It is a Fantastic visual prompt, I agree 😉 Thanks ever so much for reading…Im glad you enjoyed my perspective 🙂
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Jimmy Stewart and Kim Novak would hate that staircase. LOL Excellent story.
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LOL I think youre right 😉 Thanks Ever So much…happy you enjoyed it.
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Very good direction with prompt. There’s a lot of hesitation in your words as he decides the way to go. ☺
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I didn’t notice the hesitation in the words until you mentioned it, but its amazing it came across that way (even unintentionally) 🙂 Thanks ever so much for stopping by..Im so glad you enjoyed my spin on the prompt 🙂
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The best parts of writing are often subconscious. We tend to formulate the storyline as we go. I find I didn’t it more than I think. When I write settings, I’m constantly amazed how is comes out without trying
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The wonder of words 🙂
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An incredibly tangible read! I loved the last line! Really wonderful! ☺
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Thank You Ever So Much 🙂 Im so delighted you enjoyed it. And thanks ever so much for visiting!
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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Very nice description, the persona’s feelings are very well brought out . Nice job!
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Thanks Joy 🙂 Ive been delving into Flash Fiction just recently and found FFfAW just this week 🙂 its nice to be welcomed so kindly and Im delighted you enjoyed my take on the prompt 😉
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Welcome to the club! Nice to ‘meet’ you!
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Thanks Joy 🙂 Hoping to make it a weekly affair 🙂
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Great writing, such descriptive language. I can sense his internal struggle. Nice ending too – the human soul is a complex place to journey through!
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Thanks Ever So, Iain 😉 I waxed a bit introspective on this one LOL. So glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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Wonderful! I love how you used the prompt as journey into himself and he had to make the decision for that journey. Well done! Welcome to the FFfAW challenge! We are happy you have joined us!
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Thank You Joy 🙂 Im delighted to have found you(r group) and look forward to challenging myself each week. Im so happy you liked where the prompt led me …I was as well 🙂 Thanks Ever So~
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It’s very nice to have you! I enjoyed your story! There will not be a FFfAW challenge in the next two weeks but will resume after that.
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😉 i will mark my calendar 😉
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Awesome!
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🙂 🙂 🙂 Thank You Dahlia 🙂
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🙂
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I love the descriptive style of your writing. Your story also flows so beautifully as he considers the possible choices – which lead us to his reasoned decision and that excellent last line. A great read, Morgan.
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Im so delighted you enjoyed this so much Millie. Thank You ever so much and for welcoming me so Kindly to FFfAW 🙂 Looking forward to more challenges 🙂
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These challenges are always a lot of fun and I do them whenever I can. I really enjoyed your story and look forward to reading more!
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I hope he finds something rewarding. 🙂
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Ha! Me too 🙂
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