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Looking round, he realized the stars had drawn closer, much closer. No longer shimmering in the distance, they hovered round him, pressing inward as the cacophony of laughter intensified. His ears rang with the tumult; his senses spun, but worse than the dizzying discordance was the scourge of anger that flared within him.
He didn’t like being laughed at, particularly by unseen phantoms lingering in the ethereal void into which he had plunged. Growling with ire, he pushed himself up from the parched ground and glared upward at the stars, which glared back, diverted by his blunder.
Breaths became blades…
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~Morgan~
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Part One – This Flash Fiction piece is a sequel to Passage, which I wrote in response to Sue Vincent’s #Writephoto weekly photoprompt.
Part Two – Time Stood Still
Part Three – The Void
Part Four – Her Voice
Part Five – Beguiling
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Hooked. This is great writing.
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🙂 🙂 🙂 You’ve made me Smile 🙂 Thanks ever so!
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Just please don’t George RR Martin us!
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? whatever do you mean?
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This is magnificent, and yes I love it. 🙂
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Ive gotten quite caught up in writing this one 😉 started off as a flashfiction, but I have a feeling its going to end up a full blown short story lol 😉
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That would be wonderful! I think it’s a great idea. It is shaping up to be an excellent read. 🙂
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Ive never written a short story…until now lol 😉
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It really is great. I hope you keep them coming, at least on occasion. You are so magnificent at it. 🙂
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There will be another installment tomorrow 😉 Promise!
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🙂 Thank You!
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Damned pixie devils!
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LOL tee hee 🙂
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Excellent!
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🙂 I took a left turn lol 😉
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Smiles
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Thank you most kindly for the reblog Tracey 🙂
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